I saw a glycerin waterfall at 8 o'clock night when the weather was jolly and tom tei was feed its cheeks . and the tomtei were in the hanukkah there at richards spencer . The rocks were covered in blue moss.
Hi Jeremy your waterfall piece of descriptive writing was really good. I could tell you took your time to describe the scene. What was your favourite part to write in this piece? I think you could describe the water as "crystal clear" or something along those lines. I think that they would be a good add on to your writing! Bye!
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Hi Jeremy your waterfall piece of descriptive writing was really good. I could tell you took your time to describe the scene. What was your favourite part to write in this piece? I think you could describe the water as "crystal clear" or something along those lines. I think that they would be a good add on to your writing! Bye!
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