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Here is Jeremy excellent the coin planning

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Friday 6 August 2021

jeremy excellent blog post the perest

Hello fellows what a lovely friday it is, I've got a new post.. I  doing a writing about the present 

IN love place  a germany there was this boy playing shooting video games

his name was richard 

Richard’s mum jamie came through the door with a present “I was in the box waiting for my surprise” said the puppy named stepney when I was in the car it was very Weather bouncy and I was absolutely furious she put me down in front of the table in front of richard I heard richard’s mum jamie persuading the boy richard to go outside because it was sunny she opened the blinds and richard furious he said “MUM!’ your


disturbing my game Jamie quickly turned off the tv so ricard had an idea and opened the box he thought I  was very cute but i was only

growing a leg. Richard was holding me very cheerfully but then he looked at my

missing leg and he throw me very far! I went thump on the carpet my stomach i was very very sad but i  had a lovely beautiful idea. It made me very happy so i went up to richard and i said “richard could you play with me please ist

a very beautiful day richard kick me with a thug” . there was the same  Goldfish  . Then a had an Idea  i khow thet goldfish      Henry Gordon and Percy  the there goldfish . made Richard  like them . I was  that Richard    he  turnd   on the tv  and i got love i saw are red ball and i ran is fast is a Motorbike  and i BANG me Hear it on Cupboard  door Hert my very happy and to Richard   . Richard didit cear   at all thet made me Cross  and Oflet very Tarable  .  then Richard  Realise  that  its ko to have one leg  so he got his cranches . he said mum were going outside som and play din sun and the goldfish were fin  I was vey happy and i played withy red ball .