Hi Jeremy. Your story was amazing! I couldn't make it any better myself. Were you influenced by something to write this piece? I'd really like to know. maybe you could read your writing out loud to see if it makes sense. Bye!
Hello Jeremy Hi my name is Sophia and I'm from room 24 yes I do like it but why is there hardly any writing. Maybe you could write a bit more. Did you like doing the writing? come and check out my blog. blog you later. Sophia
Hi Jeremy. Your story was amazing! I couldn't make it any better myself. Were you influenced by something to write this piece? I'd really like to know. maybe you could read your writing out loud to see if it makes sense. Bye!
ReplyDeleteHello Jeremy
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sophia and I'm from room 24
yes I do like it but why is there hardly any writing. Maybe you could write a bit more. Did you like doing the writing?
come and check out my blog.
blog you later.
Sophia