Tuesday, 19 October 2021

jeremy super excited and wrok and

it was vrey graet it toke are log time it was afe litt bit hard by

2 comments:

  1. Fakaalofa atu Jeremy, You have been working hard! I really like that the Kereru's superpower is to help teach others what's right. You found out that the loss of habitat and predators (cats, dogs, rats) are causing Kiwis to become endangered. What superpower would you need to stop these things from harming Kiwis? I like the way you used Mote to record your story. That meant I could listen to your ideas as well as read them.
    Remember how Ms Green suggested you could add images to your Google Drawing and then add your own details to them. Maybe you could try that so you can add images to your comic. blog you later, Megan : )

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  2. Kia ora Megan thank you for saying that. I use mote for my story. I had 3 gos at mote until I got it right . My villain is a stoat and her name is Jenny and my new zealand pigeon makes soup.

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