Mālō e lelei Jeremy. I enjoyed reading your story and was impressed with vocabulary like monitoring and advised. What is a Paraguay frog? I've never heard of that. I'd love to watch your video. Do you know how to change the settings so that anyone can view it?
Mālō e lelei Jeremy, You have used the Adventure Story Mountain Planner well! Did it help you write your story? I like the way you slowly built up the tension in your story by describing the ground shaking and the scientist warning of an eruption. It was great to see you reading your story. This means other students who are not strong readers can still access your work. Ka Pai! Keep up the great work, Megan : )
Mālō e lelei Jeremy, Oh my goodness your One Tree Hill story is frightening for me.....I live close to this mountain!!! Good work Jeremy, I enjoyed reading your story.
Fantastic news report, Jeremy, I can see you reporting for TVNZ One News in the future. I think One Tree Hill is a dormant volcano, isn't it?
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DeleteMālō e lelei Jeremy. I enjoyed reading your story and was impressed with vocabulary like monitoring and advised. What is a Paraguay frog? I've never heard of that. I'd love to watch your video. Do you know how to change the settings so that anyone can view it?
ReplyDeleteps. It was your catchy title that made me click on your blog.
DeleteMālō e lelei Jeremy, You have used the Adventure Story Mountain Planner well! Did it help you write your story? I like the way you slowly built up the tension in your story by describing the ground shaking and the scientist warning of an eruption. It was great to see you reading your story. This means other students who are not strong readers can still access your work. Ka Pai! Keep up the great work, Megan : )
ReplyDeleteHi Megan hows your day going . the writing did help and it very good I up with ;lost of ides blog ya leter
DeleteMālō e lelei Jeremy, Oh my goodness your One Tree Hill story is frightening for me.....I live close to this mountain!!! Good work Jeremy, I enjoyed reading your story.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteGreat work! You have taught me a lot about volcanos!
Keep up the great work!
Thanks for sharing!