More of Jeremy's Wairaka legend retell

I did some more work about Wairaka saving her tribe while the men were on the island.  What was your favourite part in my story?

 

Wairaka called her Tribes  . Yes Wairaka they said help me paddled. A woman next to a tall  man was the Only man that get out Because he was sick  . she ran up to the Front of the waka she said  this your not Allowed  to Pedal  she said on are  very Snooty  vice . Wairaka had to doing Because  it was the Only safe her  tribe . She said this look do you want to die? She said  no   at all . Exactly, she said .  that will be  Terrible  . Ok let's do this so her thrides kia Whakatane au i ahau . let me At  like  a man  she  yelled with pound she got the waka moving . Everyone was   chearing the men was happy the men got on .